Can somebody compose and design this ghazal

[Tahir Adeem]

TERE NAIN KANWAL

Khud jaate hain Alfaaz main dhhal Tere Nain Kanwal
Main likhta nahin likhte hain ghazal Tere Nain Kanwal

Shadaab , shafiq , shagufta hain , shabnam bhi hain
Sachhal,suchhe ,sachhe hain, sajal Tere Nain Kanwal


Nadaan , kanar - e - wasl gurezaan rehte hen
Aur hijr main karte hen jal thal Tere Nain Kanwal

Mashoor jab hone lagta hun main baaton se
Tab jaate hen ye baat badal Tere Nain Kanwal

Is dunya men hai jheel se gehri zaat meri
Aur jheel men hain bas do hi Kanwal Tere Nain Kanwal

Har bhed hai mere dil ka in se wabista
Hen meri har ik mushkil ka hal Tere Nain Kanwal

Ho hijr ki talkhi ka ya wasl ke resham ka
Har mosam men hain jaan atal Tere Nain Kanwal

Betaab sa ho kar in ko chhoona chaahun to
Mujhe kehte hain abhi aur machal Tere Nain Knawal

Har dhoop main mujh par saaya hai teri palkon ka
Mere saath safar main hain pal pal Tere Nain Kanwal

Har zakhm pe TAHIR pyaar ka marham rakhte hain
Jab jism mera hota he Shal Tere Nain Kanwal
Tahir Adeem(Germany)

[Editor]

Asalam o Alaikum,

mujhay umeed hai urdupoet.net kay designer iss ko compose kar dein gai.

wa.Salam

[hotkhan]

salaam alai kum,

Inshallah i will do it,

allah hafiz,

[hotkhan]

janaab tahir sahab, aap ki request ki gayi ghazal design ho gayi hain, inshallah aap ko pasand aayegi. designed section mein check karle.

http://www.urdupoet.net/forum/12-des...html#post10917

[Tahir Adeem]

Thanks a lot Hotkhan ...khush rahain ...bohut umdaah he ...."jazakallah"

[dashingasad]

Originally Posted by hotkhan

janaab tahir sahab, aap ki request ki gayi ghazal design ho gayi hain, inshallah aap ko pasand aayegi. designed section mein check karle.

http://www.urdupoet.net/forum/12-des...html#post10917

waaah khan ji kia nain dhondhay fantastic bhai

bohat piyary ankhon k sath design kia hay
God bless you

[hotkhan]

salaam alai kum.

meine changes kardiya hain, aap phir ek baar check karlein.

shakeel

[Al-Kabeer]

Excellent Ghazal...!

[QUEEN VICTORIA]

good designing hk
wabasta main toye nahin tay aata hai
sahgufta main wao nahin aaye gi
sheen gaaf fay tay gol hay
suchal kay baad suchay hai ssochay nahin
sachay aur suchay likhnay main yahi farq ho ga kay aik amin tashdeed aaye gi tou talafuz waziya ho jaye ga

[Tahir Adeem]

Originally Posted by QUEEN VICTORIA

good designing hk
wabasta main toye nahin tay aata hai
sahgufta main wao nahin aaye gi
sheen gaaf fay tay gol hay
suchal kay baad suchay hai ssochay nahin
sachay aur suchay likhnay main yahi farq ho ga kay aik amin tashdeed aaye gi tou talafuz waziya ho jaye ga

Queen Viczoria BAJA farma rahi hen.Tahir Adeem